They look pretty darn nice.
I'm not critiquing your slugs but I'm wondering about the rough edge at base of dome, top of OD body. IF, they were to be smoother, would any discernible change in BC be seen? Air flow & all. I'm just asking as I'm no ballistics expert but I do know long range shooters definitely would not want any rough edges or burrs.
Again, I'm just trying to educate myself, not nit pick your work. They look great.